Table of Contents
Introduction
The
Writing Process
Theories
of Writing A Screenplay
Formatting
your Screenplay
Selling
your Screenplay
Introduction
If you’re creative
and like to make your own stories then the idea of screenwriting
has probably crossed your mind more than once. In fact you may
watch a television show and wonder where the story comes from,
what a script actually looks like and how does one go from
writing a script to having their own television show. Well the
truth is, it’s not easy screenwriting is not just about writing
some witty dialogue and a few action scenes it is actually all
about knowing the format and how much or how little control a
writer has over the final product. This article is going to help
you go through the steps necessary to create, format and even
sell your own screenplay.
The Writing Process
The first step to creating
a screenplay is to have an idea, every great television show,
play, and movie starts with one great idea that then spirals
down into a successful screenplay. It is important to note that
whatever you decide you want to write for, you will have to know
the specific format and style that the script needs to be in.
But we’ll cover more about format later.
When you are creating your
idea it is important to really dive deep and find out everything
you can about the world you want to create, the characters you
want to create and the story. Even if you cannot spend 30 pages
of the script telling the back story of your character, knowing
that back story will help you figure out how they would react to
certain situations and it will help the actors and the director
know how to treat that character.
For example in the movie
Inglourious Basterds one of the main characters Aldo Raine
(portrayed by Brad Pitt) has a very unique personality and a
very interesting scar around his neck. Though the story of where
Raine came from or how he got the scar is never directly
addressed in the film, Quentin Tarantino knew that back story
and used it to help Brad Pitt portray his character. The more
you know about the characters the more emotion you will get from
them and the more their actions will fit who they are, instead
of being a random sequence of events.
One of the most important
parts of the writing process is to read and rewrite everything.
The more you read your work and have others read it, the more
you will be able to see the story and see what needs to be fixed
or changed. No script or story is perfect the first time out,
and most writers will say a script is never perfect. So the goal
is to keep rewriting until it is as close to perfect as possible
and then you can try pitching your idea to the world.
Theories of Writing a Screenplay
Now when you go to plan out
and eventually write your screen play it is important to be
aware of the different theories and ideas about how a script
should be formatted. Some of these theories come all the way
back from the time of the ancient Greeks when they performed the
first plays and still exist as guides for screenwriters today.
Though these theories may not be appropriate for all types of
stories and you may choose to use more than one or none at all.
But knowing the theories can help you see how to organize your
own story.
Three act structure
Most screenplays have a three
act structure, following an organization that dates back to
Aristotle's Poetics and developed with respect to feature
films by Syd Field, author of Screenplay and The
Screen Writer's Workbook. The three acts are setup (of the
location and characters), confrontation (with an obstacle), and
resolution (culminating in a climax and a dénouement). In a
two-hour film, the first and third acts typically last 30
minutes, with the middle act lasting an hour.
In Writing Drama, French
writer and director
Yves
Lavandier shows a
slightly different approach. As most theorists, he maintains
that every human action, whether fictitious or real, contains
three logical parts: before the action, during the action, and
after the action. But since the climax is part of the action,
Yves Lavandier considers the second act must include the climax.
Which makes for a much shorter third act than what is found in
most screenwriting theories.
Besides the three act structure,
one could also use four or even five acts in a screenplay,
though these would be used to suit longer stories than the
classic 120 page format.
The Hero's Journey
The Hero's Journey, also
referred to as the
Monomyth,
is an idea formulated by noted mythologist Joseph Campbell. The
central concept of the Monomyth is that a pattern can be seen in
stories and myths across history. Campbell defined and explained
that pattern in his book The Hero with a Thousand Faces(1949).
Campbell's insight was that
important myths from around the world which have survived for
thousands of years, all share a fundamental structure. This
fundamental structure contains a number of stages, which
includes
-
A call to
adventure,
which the hero has to accept or decline
-
A road of
trials,
regarding which the hero succeeds or fails
-
Achieving
the goal or "boon,"
which often results in important self-knowledge
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A return
to the ordinary world,
again as to which the hero can succeed or fail
-
Application of the boon,
in which what the hero has gained can be used to improve the
world
Later, screenwriter Christopher
Vogler refined and expanded the Hero's Journey for the
screenplay form in his book, The Writer's Journey: Mythic
Structure for Writers(1993).
Syd Field's Paradigm
Screenwriting guru
Syd Field
wrote the seminal book Screenplay, and posited a new
theory, which he called the Paradigm. Field noticed that in a
120-page screenplay, Act Two was notoriously boring, and was
also twice the length of Acts One and Three. He also noticed
that an important dramatic event usually occurred at the middle
of the picture, which implied to him that the middle act was
actually two acts in one. So the Three Act Structure is notated
1, 2a, 2b, 3, resulting in Aristotle's Three Acts divided into
four pieces.
Field also introduced the idea
of Plot Points into screenwriting theory. Plot Points are
important structural functions that happen in approximately the
same place in most successful movies, like the verses and
choruses in a popular song. In subsequent books, Field has added
to his original list, and students of his like Viki King and
Linda Seger have added to the list of Plot Points. Here is a
current list of the major Plot Points that are congruent with
Field's Paradigm:
Opening Image:
The first image in the screenplay should summarize the entire
film, especially its tone. Often, writers go back and redo this
as the last thing before submitting the script.
Inciting Incident:
Also called the catalyst, this is the point in the story when
the Protagonist encounters the problem that will change their
life. This is when the detective is assigned the case, where Boy
meets Girl, and where the Comic Hero gets fired from his cushy
job, forcing him into comic circumstances.
Plot Point 1:
The last scene in Act One, Turning Point One is a surprising
development that radically changes the Protagonist's life, and
forces him to confront the Opponent. In Star Wars, this
is when Luke's family is killed by the Empire. He has no home to
go back to, so he joins the Rebels in opposing Darth Vader.
Pinch 1:
A reminder scene at about 3/8 the way through the script
(halfway through Act 2a) that brings up the central conflict of
the drama, reminding us of the overall conflict. For example, in
Star Wars, Pinch 1 is the
Stormtroopers
attacking the Millennium Falcon in
Mos Eisley,
reminding us the Empire is after the stolen plans to the Death
Star R2-D2 is carrying and Luke and Ben Kenobi are trying to get
to the Rebel Alliance (the main conflict).
Midpoint:
An important scene in the middle of the script, often a reversal
of fortune or revelation that changes the direction of the
story. Field suggests that driving the story towards the
Midpoint keeps the second act from sagging.
Pinch 2:
Another reminder scene about 5/8 through the script (halfway
through Act 2b) that is somehow linked to Pinch 1 in reminding
the audience about the central conflict. In Star Wars,
Pinch 2 is the Stormtroopers attacking them as they rescue the
Princess in the Death Star. Both scenes remind us of the
Empire's opposition, and using the Stormtrooper attack motif
unifies both Pinches.
Plot Point 2:
A dramatic reversal that ends Act 2 and begins Act 3, which is
about confrontation and resolution. Sometimes Turning Point Two
is the moment when the Hero has had enough and is finally going
to face the Opponent. Sometimes, like in Toy Story, it's
the low-point for the Hero, and he must bounce back to overcome
the odds in Act 3.
Showdown:
About midway through Act 3, the Protagonist will confront the
Main Problem of the story and either overcome it, or come to a
tragic end.
Resolution:
The issues of the story are resolved.
Tag:
An epilogue, tying up the loose ends of the story, giving the
audience closure. This is also known as denouement. In general,
films in recent decades have had longer denouements than films
made in the 1970s or earlier.
The sequence approach
The sequence approach to
screenwriting, sometimes known as "eight-sequence structure", is
a system developed by Frank Daniel, while he was the head of the
Graduate Screenwriting Program at USC. It is based, in part on
the fact that, in the early days of cinema, technical matters
forced screenwriters to divide their stories into sequences,
each the length of a reel (about ten minutes).
The sequence approach mimics
that early style. The story is broken up into eight 10-15 minute
sequences. The sequences serve as "mini-movies", each with their
own compressed three-act structure. The first two sequences
combine to form the film's first act. The next four create the
film's second act. The final two sequences complete the
resolution and dénouement of the story. Each sequence's
resolution creates the situation which sets up the next
sequence.
Formatting Your Screenplay
The format of your
screenplay can sometimes seem just as important as the story and
the idea itself. The reason for this is that when you go to find
an agent to represent your screenplay to studios or you try and
find other means to develop your screenplay (to be discussed
later) if it is incorrectly formatted they will most likely
reject the screenplay.
Why? Well the reason is
that even though the agent will know that you are a beginning
writer and may have a great idea, if you do not know what a
screenplay entails, they will not be able to market your script.
For example a screenplay needs to have some cues to let the
camera know what to look at, it also needs to describe the
characters, the scene, and the lighting, the mood…all those
things need to find their way into the script so that the
director and the actors know what to do. But on the other side
of the token if you micromanage each shot and each movement the
actor’s make your script will be unsuccessful.
So format is about creating
a balance between letting the director and the actors know what
is important to advance the plot and letting them use their own
judgment and creativity. In the end the screenplay will only act
as a guide for how to create the movie, play, television show,
etc. So the other thing to realize about formatting your
screenplay is that if you truly want to see it produced, don’t
become too attached to anything, focus on the story as a whole
and not the individual parts. In the end your favorite scenes
may be completely changed or even cut, and you do not what that
to ruin your ability to see the script come into production.
As I said before the
writing style and format will change depending on what you are
planning to write. Here is a brief overview of some of the
different formats and options that are available to you.
Motion
picture screenplays intended for submission to mainstream
studios, whether in the US or elsewhere in the world, are
expected to conform to a standard typographical style known
widely as studio format which stipulates how elements of the
screenplay such as scene headings, action, transitions, dialog,
character names, shots and parenthetical matter should be
presented on the page, as well as the font size and line
spacing.
One reason
for this is that, when rendered in studio format, most
screenplays will transfer onto the screen at the rate of
approximately one page per minute. This rule of thumb is widely
contested — a page of dialog usually occupies less screen time
than a page of action, for example, and it depends enormously on
the literary style of the writer — and yet it continues to hold
sway in modern Hollywood.
There is no
single standard for studio format. Some studios have definitions
of the required format written into the rubric of their writer's
contract. The Nicholl Fellowship, a screenwriting competition
run under the auspices of the Academy of Motion Picture Arts and
Sciences, has a useful and accurate guide to screenplay format.
Screenplays are traditionally 90-120 pages long. Comedies and
children's films tend to weigh in at the lower end.
Screenplays
are almost always written using a monospaced font, often a
variant of Courier or Courier New, both mostly used as 12 pt
font.
Television
For
American TV shows, the format rules for hour-long dramas, like
CSI, and single-camera sitcoms, like Scrubs, are essentially the
same as for motion pictures. The main difference is that TV
scripts have act breaks. Multi-camera sitcoms, like I Love Lucy
and "Seinfeld", use a different, specialized format that derives
from radio and the stage play. In this format, dialogue is
double-spaced, action lines are capitalized, and scene headings
are capitalized and underlined.
Drama
series and sitcoms are no longer the only formats that require
the skills of a writer. With reality-based programming crossing
genres to create various hybrid programs, many of the so-called
"reality" programs are in a large part scripted in format. That
is, the overall skeleton of the show and its episodes are
written to dictate the content and direction of the program. The
Writers Guild of America has identified this as a legitimate
writer's medium, so much so that they have lobbied to impose
jurisdiction over writers and producers who "format"
reality-based productions. Creating reality show formats
involves storytelling structure similar to screenwriting, but
much more condensed and boiled down to specific plot points or
actions related to the overall concept and story.
Documentaries
The script format
for documentaries and audio-visual presentations which consist
largely of voice-over matched to still or moving pictures is
different again and uses a two-column format which can be
particularly difficult to achieve in standard word processors,
at least when it comes to editing. Many script-editing software
programs include templates for documentary formats.
Now because
formatting can be such a difficult task there are a number of
books and even programs out there that can really help you. I
highly recommend getting a book that will explain all the
different cues, how to write your scene introductions, how to
write action, and how to put emotion into dialogue. These are
all very important parts of writing and formatting a successful
screenplay. But as briefly explained in the headings above,
every detail counts, such as knowing the fonts, the font sizes
and even whether or not to hole punch the pages.
As far as
recommending good books that can help you progress in your
screenwriting ability the best suggestion is to find books that
are used as textbooks for screen writing courses. The benefits
to this type of books is that they are geared toward students
who want to do screenwriting for a living so it will go through
every detail in a simple to understand way. Some books to
consider are The Screenwriter’s Bible by David Trottier this is
used in a number of schools and will cover everything you need
to know about writing a script from beginning to end. It
perfectly covers formatting and even has a section on how to
sell your newly written screenplay. This book will typically
sell for under $20 and is well worth the money. Another good
choice is Screenplay: The Foundations of Screenwriting by Syd
Field. This book is perfect for helping you understand how to
turn your story into a screenplay and even devotes an entire
chapter to formatting. This book also sells for under $20.
Now if you are
truly looking to become a serious screenwriter and do things
right, then you may also want to look into some of the
screenwriting programs that are available. One of the best and
most popular is called Final Draft and there are a number of
different versions with the newest being Final Draft 8. What is
great about this program is there are over 50 different movie
and television templates that you can choose from which will
automatically take care of most of the format. What you have is
a drop down menu for your different options such as SCENE,
ACTION, and DIALOGUE. It is important to read through the manual
to truly understand all the formatting option but often it will
even have places where it will tell you where to put your title,
where to put your name and it will even take care of fonts and
indents for you. Perhaps one of the coolest features to Final
Draft 8 is that you can assign computer voices to your script
and listen as they read it out for you. Granted this does not
offer much emotion or acting but it does give you an idea. This
can be an invaluable tool but it will also cost you with this
version selling for around $200. Older versions can often be
found for cheaper but make sure you read up on the features
because while you might save $20 you might miss out on something
that could be useful later.
Once you finish
writing out your screenplay it is important to note what your
final format should look like. Here is a brief overview of that
process.
American
screenplays are printed single-sided on three-hole-punched
letter sized (8.5 x 11 inch) paper, and held together with two
brass brads in the top and bottom hole. The middle hole is left
empty. In the UK, double-hole-punched A4 paper is often used,
although some UK writers use the US letter paper format,
especially when their scripts are to be read by American
producers, since otherwise the pages may be cropped when printed
on US paper. Despite the use of double-punched paper, it is
common to see scripts in the UK held together by a single brad
punched in the top left hand corner. This makes it easy to flip
from page to page during script meetings and may have something
to do with the taller page of A4.
Screenplays are
usually bound with a light card stock cover and back page, often
showing the logo of the production company or agency submitting
the script.
Increasingly,
reading copies of screenplays (that is, those distributed by
producers and agencies in the hope of attracting finance or
talent) are distributed printed on both sides of the paper
(often professionally bound) to cut down on paper waste out of
environmental concerns. Occasionally they are reduced to
half-size to make a small book which is convenient to read or
put in a pocket; this is generally for use by the director or
other production crew during shooting.
Although most
writing contracts continue to stipulate physical delivery of
three or more copies of a finished script, it is common for
scripts to be delivered electronically via email. Although most
production companies can handle scripts in most formats, it is
better practice to supply scripts as a PDF file where possible.
This is because it gives the writer final control over the
layout of the script, which may otherwise vary depending on what
fonts and/or paper size the recipient uses to print the script
out. The formatting software programs listed at the bottom of
this article produce industry formatted standard screenplays in
PDF.
Selling Your Screenplay
Now comes the hard part. If
you thought writing and formatting your screenplay was hard…well
you have not been through anything yet. When you try and sell
your screenplay it is all about trial and error and there are a
number of hoops to jump through.
Your first course of action
is most likely to find an agent. This is someone that will read
your script, and decide if it is something they can sell. If it
is, they will take you on as a client along with as much as 15%
and start finding networks or directors willing to take on your
script. It is important to note that agents do not cost any
money up front, any agent that asks you for money is a scam. The
reason for this is that an agent should only get money if they
sell your script, if they get your money before they do anything
with the script, they have no incentive to keep working. So
before you jump up and down at an agent accepting your script,
make sure they do not ask for money and they are a reputable
agent. A good resource is Writer’s Market. They publish a book
every year with listings of reputable agents, publishers and
even tips on how to write query letters and gain the attention
of an agent. This book sells for around $20 but it is an
invaluable resource once you reach this stage, because it also
helps you identify which agents are equipped to handle a
screenplay.
Now your first step is to
write your query letter. There are a few resources online that
will help you with this process and knowing what to say and what
not to say. This can be very important because you do not want
to turn off the agent before they even hear your idea.
The other route to go is
sometimes more successful but also more difficult. Because the
majority of agents do not represent screenplays many writer will
choose to go to production companies and film studios
themselves. If you choose to do this there are some important
things to remember. The first is to always find out who at the
company takes unsolicited screenplays, sending it to the wrong
person can close doors very quickly.
The second thing to note is
that they are not going to want your whole screenplay right
away. First they will want a log line. A log line is very short
(usually one line) synopsis that will get the production
company’s attention.
History
The log line first came into use and was
recognized as a separate form during the old studio days of
Hollywood. The studios had script vaults in which they stored
screenplays. Readers wrote a concise one line summary of what
the script was about either on the cover of the script, on the
spine of the script, or both. The log line on the spine of the
script allowed people to read the log lines of scripts that were
stacked without having to unstack them.
The log line allowed studio executives,
producers, directors, and actors to scan a great many scripts
quickly while searching for a project that they were interested
in that met their needs, whether love story, horror film, action
film, comedy or drama.
Examples of
log lines
An actual example
Charlie Brown is finally invited to a
Halloween party; Snoopy engages the Red Baron in a dogfight; and
Linus waits patiently in the pumpkin patch for the Great
Pumpkin.
-- Log Line for It's the Great Pumpkin,
Charlie Brown, as retrieved from titantv.com on 2005-10-25.
A humorous example
The following "log line" has been widely
circulated on the internet:
"Transported to a surreal landscape, a
young girl kills the first woman she meets, then teams up with
three complete strangers to do it again."
-- Log Line for The Wizard of Oz,
attributed to Richard Polito of the Marin Independent Journal,
who writes humorously sarcastic briefs for the paper's daily TV
listings.
Make sure your log line is good because you
only have one chance to win them over. If your log line is
successful they will write back asking for more information and
a synopsis of the script. Again the key is to be concise, give
the high points and only what is important. If this round is
successful then you might soon be on your way to your own movie
or television show.
As with any new hobby or pursuit, the key
is to keep trying and never give up. Most writers hit plenty of
roadblocks and got plenty of rejections before they saw their
scripts into production. But the most important thing of all to
remember is to have fun!
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